
Anna crawled across the beige carpet to reach the banister and looked down at the boisterous party below. The hall was aglow with the candles that had been fitted into the wall holders for three days now. A band was playing, half hidden behind the curtains at one end of the hall. The flowers arranged in bunches added colour to the corners. The women glittered in their sequined clothes and the masks they wore for the Halloween party. The men glided about, nursing their drinks, flitting from group to group.
Anna put a hand on the side of her stomach and groaned. She did not want to make a sound but it would not matter. The music was loud and no one would want to look up the darkened staircase and the corridor beyond. She thought back to the beating and her stomach lurched again. Her hand had a large welt from the glass of the broken crystal vase. She had been cleaning the hall along with the other servants when she had turned around and knocked the vase off the pedestal.
Anna crept down the corridor and pushed open a door. The floor was a mess of gowns, dresses, scarves and trinkets. The girls had been in a hurry to get dressed. Anna ran her good hand through the clothes and picked a shimmery gown and mask. Tonight was the night she could finally run away.
This short story is part of #TellTaleThursday with Anshu and Priya.
So many questions… definitely caught my attention.
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Thanks so much for reading.
Yes, my short stories generally throw up more questions than can be answered 😀
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Lol.
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Was Anna a slave or a victim of domestic violence? Many questions sprang in my mind sona on redding your story. My heart goes out to poor Anna, hope she is successful in running away from whatever or whoever she intends to run away from.
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I have tried to portray the servant girl Anna’s feeling after she was mistreated badly. She feels she must run away and the Halloween night is when everyone else is busy with the parties.
Thanks for reading the story, Anshu!
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I liked the vivid description of the party. Glad it gave Anna an opportunity to break free.
Enjoyed the story, Sona.
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Thanks for reading the story, Priya. I wanted to give it a very horrific twist but the beating and the running away was all I could manage.
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Great story and Run Anna, Run!
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Thanks for reading, Joy 🙂
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My pleasure!
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Run Anna Run, this is the night. Time to clean someone elses house is over.
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Thanks for reading, Abhijit!
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That’s cruel and happiness blended so well within those lines.. Certainly unexpected and totally nowhere near my guess seeing the picture.. I was expecting a very happy cheerful story.. But this is sort of dark yet great..
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Thanks for the feedback!
I am glad you liked it.
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Loved Reading your story Sona, but I have a few questions? Was she running with a boy ? or was she a maid ?I hope Anna got what she wanted after running !:)
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So lovely that you went from happy to sad to despair to hope in a matter of such few words.
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