Once again, a group of writers from different geographical regions gather together to create a wonderful story. The photograph above serves as the inspirational theme for the 6th Flash Fiction Chain hosted by Jithin of Photrablogger. Give his beautiful site a visit and feast your eyes on the inspirational photos or read about his adventures.
A comprehensive list of characters in the story: (Main)
Anna Brighton- 32 year old CEO who owns and runs a publishing company
Alex Burns – well established author, Anna’s ex, Toby Blackwell’s cousin
Melissa Doyle –the bride, Anna’s dear friend
Toby Blackwell – co-owns the Blackwell estate, Alex’s cousin
(Supporting characters)
Jenny- Anna’s secretary
Adam – Owner of Adam and Eve’s
Harrison – Melissa’s fiance.
Percy Tuppence – Owner of the ring shop
Part 1 : Written by Sona
Part 2 : Written by Yinglan
Part 3 : Written by Priceless Joy
Part 4 : Written by Frenesthetist
Part 5 : Written by Dr. KO
Part 6 : Written by Sweety
Part 7 : Written by Tobias
Part 8 : Written by Ruth
Part 9 : Written by Austin
Part 10: Written by Rashmi
Part 11: Written by Phaena
Part 12: Written by Manvi
Do read these parts before mine to get a clear picture of the story!
The Wedding Bells-Part 13
Anna waved furiously to the newly wedded couple in the gleaming red limousine, about to leave. She held one hand up to her temple, pressing it with her perfumed handkerchief. Perfumes always made her ill; it was no doubt she had a headache. Why on earth had she worn a perfume instead of her usual deo she could not fathom herself. She looked down at her now crumpled dress held together at the back rather cleverly by pins that Alex helped her with.
“God! What a mess”, she thought. “One dress, two wardrobe malfunctions in a single wedding ceremony! Wonder what my luck would be at my own wedding”, she half muttered as the smiling flower girl, Sara skipped towards her. “Hey, Anna! You have crumpled the bouquet too much! It is good luck! You are the next to get married!”, chirped little Sara.
Anna squinted against the afternoon sun to see who had overheard them. She was in a group of people all excitedly chattering about the just married Melissa and Harrison, now off to their honeymoon destination. Anna felt a strange emptiness. The anticipation of the wedding was now over, and so was the adrenaline pumping through her body all morning because of her journey to fetch the bride’s ring and her subsequent encounter with Ms. Beaumount which turned ummm.. rather violent. Anna was amazed at herself. She, the sensible businesswoman, away from all matters of the heart and frivolous behaviour was at that very day been acting like a… giddy teenager!
She coloured a bright crimson at the thought of her stolen kisses with Toby and the memory of their physical closeness and the possibilities made her go weak in her knees all over again. At the same time, guilt stabbed at her, for she could not get Alex’s speculative look out of her mind. His tenderness as he helped her with her dress zipper the second time it came apart was too sweet to be dismissed. No sparks flew; his fingers did not linger on her body; his breath was not hot and urgent but his face screwed up in concentration with pins in his mouth reminded her sweetly of their high school dating years. She could hear their shared laughter and innocent jokes as they walked hand in hand beside the lake near her parent’s house.
Anna came out of her reverie with a start. There was raucous laughter behind her as the group of Alex’s friends and cousins came closer. She heard Toby before she saw him. He was obviously drunk with a wild look in his eyes. They were making jokes about the married couple and Toby’s smirk left her shaken.
” Miss Brighton, there is a call for you on the telephone in the house”, managed the breathless housemaid. Anna stared at the flowers in the maid’s hair as she followed her back into the rambling Blackwell Estate. It was difficult for Anna to locate the library where the telephone was situated on her own. The entire staff was dressed in their finery on account of the wedding reception, the remnants of which were being cleared from the mansion’s grounds.
“Dad!”, Anna shouted into the telephone receiver. “It has been the best wedding ever and Melissa looked such a stunning beauty!”
“Yes, Dad, they received your congratulatory telegram and I miss you and Mom so much.”
“Yes, I can visit you now that I am here, nearer home but I need to get back to office to work out things. My business is suffering.”
“Umm, OK, I suppose so, if this means just another day… but I can make it some other time. There are deals that need to be signed”, intoned Anna weakly as it brought to her mind the contract that had been signed with the eminent author Alex.
“Uh, Dad, just book my flight for the next day from home. I sure must come and see you both”, said Anna twisting the telephone wire around her fingers.
” Damn”, said Anna angrily as she ended the call and tried to reason her own elation at seeing Alex again at work. She badly needed her parent’s comfortable and sensible presence to pull her out of this vortex of emotions.
Anna raced up the stairs to her own room to get her cell phone. She had to inform Jenny, her personal secretary of her absence of another day and to find out if there were any other pressing issues at work.
As she pushed open the door to her room, Anna staggered back in shock. There was Toby, unmistakably charming with ruffled hair, kissing the housemaid. She stared at the now crumpled flowers in her hair, her head spinning.
“Ah, Anna! I was looking for you”, smiled Toby, slurring his words. Anna felt her cheeks flush from the anger in her.
“You are drunk. You are kissing the maid in my room”, said Anna coldly.
” Just looking for you, darling!”.
“And as you said, I am a little drunk, so the confusion”, winked Toby at the housemaid, patting her bottom. The maid rushed past Anna to go out of the room.
“Out”, said Anna to Toby gesturing at the still open door, her voice cracking a little. She was losing her composure again, she realised.
Toby lurched towards Anna and held her waist in a vice like grip, almost leering. That was when she heard someone walk in. She turned with a desperate look in her eyes and saw Alex.
To be continued by Yinglan
Omg. That was a twist NO one expected. :O
Gives everyone so much to work with, brilliant 😀
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Thank you! I thought Anna had been undecided for too many parts of the story. Had to nudge her a bit 🙂
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Yes, it’s perfect 😀
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You are a fine writer and it is always a pleasure reading your stories. Great continuation. And a great suspense at the end! This is getting interesting 🙂
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Thank you for the praise. You are always encouraging 🙂
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My pleasure 🙂
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This is simply wow, awesome continuation.: )
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Thank you Phaena! Well, we are all getting a second chance at writing this wonderful story 🙂
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Wow! It kept me hanging on to my seat! Excellent!
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Thank you so much. It was good to be writing about these characters again 🙂
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This is fun that we get to write another section for this month. I know that ya’ll publish Novella’s with this but if there were enough people we could write a short novel!
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Great idea, actually. And no writer’s block when there are so many people contributing 😀
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Very true! No writers’ block. 🙂
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That was such an intense moment right there at the end. Once again, you’ve delivered a sublime continuation to the story. That was wonderful Sona!
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Thank you for your encouraging words. I had not been following the story for some days. When i read all the parts yesterday, i was amazed at how well the storyline and characters had evolved!
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As usual I am impressed with your writing and narrative abilities. You told a great portion that pushed the story along and added layers and possibilities. Good work.
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Thank you!
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As if we needed a further demonstration of your evident talent! 😀 Great twist (I love a twist, me) and it’s given everyone something to work with to keep the whole story fresh and fun. Great work here 🙂
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Thanks, Tobias. Too bad i had to brand Toby the bad guy but Anna was indecisive for too long 🙂
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Poor Toby….this is what I expected when i let him made love with Anna…..somehow I found Alex too serious guy not fit for romancing but you did wonders and yes Toby can be seen as a bad boy. 🙂
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The romance between Toby and Anna was superbly presented by you. Toby is interesting, charming, flamboyant. He brought excitement into Anna’s life. Yet, he had to be sacrificed in favour of Alex, who might be considered steady and ‘safe’.
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YEAH ! well said !
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